Monday, January 10, 2011
The pearl
I think that the book is a little hard to follow some times. The book is full of mysteries and questions. Some are will someone try to steal the pearl and will the baby die, those are just some of the questions in the book. I some what like the book, it hasn’t got a lot of action in it or adventure yet. I'm hoping the book will pick up soon maybe have some more action. The story plot is pretty good so far, I wonder if the pearl will not be as valuable when they try to use it.
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Be sure to self edit carefully and remember that good writing skills always apply. You might want to self edit both these pieces about The Pearl to correct errors, and rewrite some of the sentences to get rid of "I think."
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