Misjudged
Authors Note- I wrote this essay to prove the stereotype that the Greasers are misjudged by everyone else.
In the book the outsiders there are a lot of stereotype. One of them is about the whole Greaser’s gang the stereotype is. Because of how they look no one thinks there good enough to be part of a regular society because of how they look and how they live.
They aren’t the richest people, they barley have any money at all, there parents don’t care about them, and they are forced to survive any way that’s possible, unlike the Socs who are rich and spoiled, with wealthy parents that can get them anything they want as well as caring about their kids.
Since the Greasers live in these conditions and look like the people that see them on the streets and even the Socs think they aren’t good enough to be accepted like any other person, they are considered to be the lowest stature of living. Compared to the socs they are gum on the bottom of humanities shoe. But the greasers don’t care because they accept the fact that they are different then everybody else.
That is why the stereotype that the Greasers are misjudged is true, and I hope that I proved that to you through this essay.
I think my essay deserves a proficient.
ReplyDeleteYour authors note is very clear.
ReplyDeleteYour authors note is very clear.
ReplyDeleteI think that you need to use more examples in your paragraphs.
You need to re-read your essay and think "does it fit?" and then put paragraphs were they need to go. Authors note is very good. Just use more descriptive words in your essay and then you will get a proficient.
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